first speech second speech 

For my first speech in the first speech round I talked about a family tradition of mine. Here was my feedback:

For my second speech in that round I did an oral interpretation on Kurt Vonnegut’s novel Slaughterhouse Five.

The following is the feedback I got:


Overall I think my first speech was a learning experience. I had wanted my speech to be very conversational so I didn’t stay to my original script when I practiced. I have come to realize that I am not good at coming up with fluid sentences on the spot because I would pause frequently and use a lot of filler language. I also realized that I really had to work on my movements because in my first speech I was moving around a lot. Another thing I wanted to work on was being more clear with my ideas and where I was going with my speech which was what I tried to work on in my next speech.

In my second speech I tried to make my thesis very clear. I also attempted to make there be obvious and smooth transitions before and after my oral interpretation. In this speech I practiced my pronunciation of words a lot because I knew I did not want to sound mumbly. I need to continue to work on my pauses and enunciation. Another thing I need to work on is not ending my sentences with a softer tone. I do think I did a lot better in controlling my movements in this speech. I’m going to try to move around even less. I think I could have been a little bit louder.



I have just started taking a Public Speaking class and by the end of the tenth week I would like to become a more comfortable speaker. I would also like to learn how to really engage my audience when I am informing them about things that may not pertain to them. My last goal would be that I want to be more precise and clear with what I am saying so that my audience can really understand what I am trying to say.


I believe that if I can accomplish my goals by the end of the quarter then my future will really benefit. If I can learn how to find ways of making my audience interested with what I’m telling them then it will boost my confidence and decrease my nerves. With the new skills I want to achieve I know that they will help me become better at talking to important people like employers and professors. I think that if I can be more precise with my words I can really get my message across without having to explain what I mean multiple times. If I work hard and attain these objectives I think I have a chance of really opening my audience’s eyes.


I plan on achieving my goals by practicing my speeches a lot and in front of people before I actually give my speech in class. I will also try to be as well informed on my topics in order to feel more confident. I want to try different techniques to try to spark my audience’s interest in my speech. I will try to ask friends and my professor for feedback so that I can improve my speech arrangement and word choices.



Sources:  Forbes: Six Ways to be an Amazing Public Speaker

Inc.: 20 Public Speaking Tips of the Best Ted Talks

Pick the Brain: 10 Ways to Conquer Fear of Public Speaking

Briantracy: 27 Useful Tips to Overcome Your Fear of Public Speaking

The Muse: How I Finally Got Over My Fear of Public Speaking

Hongkiat: How to Nail an Interesting Presentation